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Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Rapmaestro(m): 4:35pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy:na capital U i use instead of small u |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 4:50pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Presentation! Presentation!! Presentation!!! You need to amend your first two entries on that thread Maestro. The arrangement is off putting and I didn't feel motivated to read on. Is it possible for you to go back and make the necessary arrangements? I'm quite certain if you do that, more people would be encouraged to read up your work and provide you with some feedback. Do that and I'll have a look - promise. ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Rapmaestro(m): 4:59pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy: Presentation! Presentation!! Presentation!!!what particular thinq do you want me 2 chanqe? Anyway tanks but pls speculate... |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Ishilove: 5:06pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy:Thanks dear. I noticed a few other things but I didn't comment on them because they are minor, and besides, I am not even sure I can do a better job so I let it slide. In addition,I didn't want to be accused of 'bad belle-ism'. Didn't want folks mummuring that Ishi too dey find fault or Ishi too dey form like na she sabi pass. In fact, a lot of folks are waiting for my own submission so that they can tear into Miss Know All's work. Abeg ma pipo, make una sofry for me o. Me sef be rookie ![]() That asides, Efe, you did good. GIRL POWER!!! ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 5:08pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
This is what I mean...rather than type: One day Bello was going to school. There was a fly standing on a wall. The fly said to him: "Good Morning are you going to school?" Bello answered, "Good Morning, yes I am" It would be better for you to present it this way: One day, Bello was going to school. There was a fly standing on a wall. The fly said to him, "Good Morning, are you going to school?" Bello answered, "Good Morning, yes I am". Now d'you see the difference? The content hasn't changed, just the presentation...and I tell you truthfully, most readers would prefer to read the bit in green rather than the bit in blue. It's all about presentation. Shey you get me now? ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Rapmaestro(m): 5:12pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy: This is what I mean...rather than type:oh! Now i qet..tanks,i'll correct dat |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 5:14pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Cool ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by maclatunji: 5:23pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena, I have read your work. Of course, you are a very technically sound writer and the quality shows in your writing. You crafted intrigue at the beginning of your chapter but there wasn't much suspense. David figured things out a little bit too easily for events he previously knew nothing about or did he? |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 5:26pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Ishilove: Nothing bad belle-ism about it jare. I agree criticism can be hard to accept especially as each writer/artist views their work as their 'baby'...but without it, how else does one get better? Re the bolded bit: Now you exaggerate! ![]() ![]() Shebi you don buy your made-in-Aba-bullet-proof-vest? ![]() But on a more serious note, you're going to do well with your chapter. You'll be fine - I know you will. Now stop worrying! ![]() ***Phew! Glad I don submit my own sha...the tension must be gathering momentum for the rest of you guys. Even the ever vocal Mazi don go quiet all of a sudden! *** ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Rapmaestro(m): 5:27pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
maclatunji: David figured things out a little bit too easily for events he previously knew nothing about or did he?exactly what i was thinkinq |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 5:31pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
maclatunji: Efemena, I have read your work. Of course, you are a very technically sound writer and the quality shows in your writing. Cheers, Mac. Re David: Let's just say some people are naturally intuitive - so yes, he did make a couple of lucky guesses / assumptions. Having said that, remember though, that he didn't have all the answers to the riddles... ![]() Rap maestro: exactly what i was thinkinq Really. After all this time, na now you just dey 'think am'? ![]() ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Ishilove: 6:10pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Double post ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 6:49pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
^^ ![]() ![]() Why the huge quotation Ishi? ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by MaziOmenuko: 6:50pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy: Nah! I was never vocal on this particular thread. But trust me, my work is 70% complete. I intend completing it tomorrow, then do all the editing before uploading. With 'veracious' and critique readers like ishi hovering around this thread, you only have to up your game. Their is no amount of editing that will prevent her from picking up one or two mistakes; if its not the tenses, its the use of verbs and punctuation. I tire oh! I even saw larry pointing out a correction that punctuation should be inside a quote and not outside!! The thing tire me!!! I saw your pointers, you really had it worked out. I guess if larry allows you, you will complete this story by yourself. ![]() ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 6:58pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
^^ Hahaha!! Re pointers: I guess it's all about interest jare. I love writing and writing on this particular genre has been an eye opener for me. Learnt a couple of things along the way. I don't know how you do it...managing this work plus the constant on going work on your other thread. Do you have it all typed out or do you simply type 'on the go'? The reason I ask is because you're very good with the updates. Not many writers can boast of being that consistent. It's one thing capturing your readers interests...but holding that interest...it's no mean feat. I doff my hat to you on that one, Mazi ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by MaziOmenuko: 7:13pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
I don't have my work typed out! I type and upload. I'm currently typing the last paragraph of the work I will upload in the next 10 minutes. After that, I will start typing a new chapter. It isn't an easy feat, not at all. Sometimes, I have to type my next work in the direction of my reader's comment. But when I have extra time, I can type two chapters and keep one for a later update. I have managed to do my plotting for this detection work. I want to give it quality time and attention least I do a low quality job. You really did a nice work, you gave me many pointers to work with. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 7:20pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Mazi_Omenuko: I don't have my work typed out! I type and upload. I'm currently typing the last paragraph of the work I will upload in the next 10 minutes. After that, I will start typing a new chapter. Yessssssssssss....I noticed that! ![]() You know something? I'm thinking...for the next round, maybe you and I should switch places? What sayest thou, kind sir?? ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by MaziOmenuko: 7:31pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy: Next round of this detection work or what? |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 7:37pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Tut, tut, tut... Next round of this detection work Mazi. What else would I be talking about na? ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by MaziOmenuko: 7:39pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy: Tut, tut, tut... You want me to write immediately after Moss ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 7:47pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
^^ Yes. If we switch places, you'll be writing immediately after Red... Besides, I haven't said I want you to..I'm asking if you'll consider it? It might just give me the opportunity to work with your characters. Now, that's a challenge I'd like to take you up on ![]() ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by MaziOmenuko: 8:01pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
^ ^ ok. Deal! Let's see how I manage the characters you created. A lot of characters has been introduced by you guys. I'm trying hard to work with them and not create more so the story can still be easy to comprehend. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 8:04pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
^^ Cool. Now this is something I'm really going to look forward to! ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 8:08pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Mazi_Omenuko: Come, this man...stop modifying your posts! ![]() And why that facial expression now? ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Nobody: 8:17pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Can I make a suggestion? Yes! Is it possible to change or edit the title of that thread? 'nairaland writers collaboration'? Sounds really lame. Doesn't inspire someone to open the thread Jo. Abeg Larry consider this suggestion. Tank you :* :*°•ĸϊsš•°:* :* |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 8:29pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
brokoto: Can I make a suggestion? Yes! So what's the suggestion then? ![]() You can't call your request a suggestion if you haven't got an alternative name for that thread! |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Rapmaestro(m): 8:48pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
LUCAN D HERO? Lolzz |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 8:50pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Rap maestro: LUCAN D HERO? Lolzz*mounts machine e-gun on stand* You said? ![]() 2 Likes |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Nobody: 8:55pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Efemena_xy:ok. Shey na my engrish be wahala? Oya call am request not suggestion. I just asked if he'll be willing to consider changing the name. He should respond before we start suggesting names na. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 8:57pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
Personally, I think the present name is just perfect. ~ It's a Nairaland thing ~ The theme is detective based ~ It is a club formed by the collaboration of varied writers! |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by Oahray: 9:05pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
^^ Plus giving the story a title at this stage might be too much of a streamline. I think it could stiffle creativity as I (or any other writer) might want the title to reflect directly in my work even when it is rather unnecesary. The thread's title is fine that way, for now. |
Re: Nairaland Detection Club by EfemenaXY: 9:11pm On Feb 21, 2013 |
^^ Thank you jare. |
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