laykorn:
Then Pearl started the ignition and drove off... Shouldn't it have been, Chichi, toucmeder? Was that a mistake?

Yes it was bless your heart. LOLZ

lenmafon:
touchmender darling check the undeleted part and make the necessary corrections

Thanks dear I've corrected it now answer my question. Do you know if I am stuck and I need suggestions to move the story forward?

touchmeder:


Thanks dear I've corrected it now answer my question. Do you know if I am stuck and I need suggestions to move the story forward?

Well at this point. I'll say unique is one bloody smart cop. And at the same time might be approachable. The eboseles should be sober enough to confess to unique and chi chi and tell them what exactly transpired on that fateful day. This will make things easier and unique do might turn things around for them . As for jesuorobo, he shouldn't be blamed. He was badly in need for money thus the blackmail. Prof buwa should know the truth and forgive. This will give the eboseles peace for crying out loud!

why do I have a feeling that bukola would be sent packing as a result of what she has done.

good job touchmeder.

Codyt:

Well at this point. I'll say unique is one bloody smart cop. And at the same time might be approachable. The eboseles should be sober enough to confess to unique and chi chi and tell them what exactly transpired on that fateful day. This will make things easier and unique do might turn things around for them . As for jesuorobo, he shouldn't be blamed. He was badly in need for money thus the blackmail. Prof buwa should know the truth and forgive. This will give the eboseles peace for crying out loud!

and what will he go back to tell the Dpo that is a good friend of his.

I am sure Bukky will go down with this scene,for not heeding the advise of her mother not to try to hurt Osazuwa's children. As for the Eboseles they should own up and seek justice with mercy.

''What did I do wrong? What part don’t you get? I said dude asked to speak to his lawyer. I couldn’t detain him further. I tried to call you but your phone was not going through. I beg lets go outside so I can explain it properly besides people are beginning to stare at us''

Chichi tried to hold his arm but Unique shrugged her off ‘’no there is no time to go outside'' he yelled. ''I thought you would hold on to him until I got back. You should have bent the lawyer rule this one time. We can’t have the three of them running around like the three bloody musketeers!’’

‘’I've just explained why it was impossible to hold him but this is the fun part’’

‘’What?’’

‘’Your hot body did not allow you see road. You ran off in a hurry but I got it covered you see. Someone is watching over Jesuorobo as we speak. The dude didn’t go to work today. He is at home and has not stepped out’’

Then for the first time Unique smiled at Chichi ''I hope you're not kidding me?'' he asked.

''Why would I?''

‘’Oh Chichi, I want to hug you so tight and squeeze the life out of you’’

‘’Don’t you dare’’ Chichi whispered.

‘’Of course I can’t – you are a married woman. What do you take me for? Why didn’t you just give me this information the whole time I was going crazy’’

''Because sometimes you need to calm down but its fun watching you turn into The Incredible Hulk''

Suddenly Unique announced in a loud voice ‘’this woman is a brilliant officer; a round of applause for her please’’

Their colleagues began to laugh; some clapped but most laughed and continued to stare at them. Then he turned to Chichi and whispered ‘’are you ready?’’

‘’Is that a question? I’ve been waiting for you ever since. Let’s go to the cul-de-sac; Obaretin Street beckons’’

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''I don’t feel good’’ Pearl replied in a weak voice.

‘’Just try to be calm. Immediately I picked Ose, I spoke to Ejemen Okogie about this thing. I was quite honest with her; I told her everything’’

''Every as in everything?''

''Yes. Every single little detail down to the tinniest bit''

‘’You didddddddddddd!’’ Pearl cried out.

‘’Dear I had to; this thing is beyond us. We both know what to say and they cannot break us but remember another person is now involved. We don’t know what can roll out of Jesuorobo’s lips. We need legal help. I had to tell her everything and she advised me on certain things. I will explain everything to you once we meet’’

Then Pearl continued to cry and speak at the same time ‘’I don’t think I can stay at work any longer. I can’t concentrate anymore. The policeman was quite hard on me although I didn’t let out anything. I’m so stressed plus I’ve been throwing up since morning. Please come and pick me now’’

‘’Hang in there – I’m on my way’’

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Bukky can pretend for Africa

‘’Good, you can go now’’

Imonitie waited patiently at the gate and once Rabiu got back with the message, he shrugged his shoulder and walked back home. Once he arrived, Pearl attacked him with questions but he didn’t have the answers she needed and he explained this carefully ‘’dear, I don’t know when he travelled or when he'll be back. I was not given all those information but the gateman said he is away. If you ask me, I think that is a good thing’’

Pearl thought about it for a minute before yelling in relief ‘’Imo, you are right. Now I think of it, I remember Jesuorobo telling me he needed to leave Benin once he received the money’’

‘’What a relief now I can relax a bit ’’

And so the Ebosele’s believed the police had not gotten through to Jesuorobo but they were wrong – so wrong.

I feel sorry for the Eboseles family. I blame Bawa and his wife for not looking after their child. I knw it was hit and run but carelessness of the Bawa cos it

I am scared.... Really scared.

This fire Bukky has stoked will consume her. Meanwhile with inclusion of Jesuorobo in this case Okungbowa will go extra length to free up his son which will passively give succour to the Eboseles. However I see Okungbowas with exception of Bukky coming out of this scenario stronger as a family than before when the reason behind Jesuorobo's action is revealed.

Bukky has gone overboard here. It is one thing to find someone annoying but another thing to purposely set him or her up for destruction. Bukky has pushed and pushed this one. I don't see her lover being able to forgive this time.

bukola has already played with fire. only hoping it won't burn her. her mother warned her but she refused to listen.

Ewoooo!!!! Today na today!!!

Just reading a mere story and my heart beats faster than the drums of China.... Touchmeder is an awesome writer no doubt.

There's a whole lot to learn from this story. A whole lot.

Bukky has taken enough for the owner to see, jesuorobo mum could not be happy seeing what her only son is going through because of bukky. She should be prepared to withstand the ant infested wood she's gattering. A ghost is about to pay her a courtesy visit.

plot twist: osazuwa will have an accident and die or slump and die then the case will be put on hold. the bukky will steal his money from the store and abscond. after some time jesuorobo will crack and Pearl will be about going to jail with her 8 month old pregnancy but imonitie will own up to the crime instead and the story will end with Pearl visiting him in jail while he asks about the new baby ..OR the new baby fee die join ma sef

.touch me there shoot me

The situation is fast brewing and degenerating into one horrible quagmire, it can be likened to a situation where you suddenly find yourself in a jungle being chased by a lion and you climb a tree and meet a very big python up there, you look around there is a river nearby,you contemplate diving in but its got Crocs and Alligators, what would you do,my advice,WAKE UP!! It can only be a dream.

I wish Imonite, Pearl or JesuRobocop will just wake up from this nightmare of a hellish scenario and realize its all been a dream especially from the drop-off scene.
We are waiting.....

ohhhh! am sooo loving this.its gettin messy.Weldon ma more ink to ya pen.lovly

Nmeri17:
plot twist: osazuwa will have an accident and die or slump and die then the case will be put on hold. the bukky will steal his money from the store and abscond. after some time jesuorobo will crack and Pearl will be about going to jail with her 8 month old pregnancy but imonitie will own up to the crime instead and the story will end with Pearl visiting him in jail while he asks about the new baby ..OR the new baby fee die join ma sef

.touch me there shoot me

*grabs 9mm...bang! You such a kill joy sha

Nmeri17:
plot twist: osazuwa will have an accident and die or slump and die then the case will be put on hold. the bukky will steal his money from the store and abscond. after some time jesuorobo will crack and Pearl will be about going to jail with her 8 month old pregnancy but imonitie will own up to the crime instead and the story will end with Pearl visiting him in jail while he asks about the new baby ..OR the new baby fee die join ma sef

.touch me there shoot me

do you have a crystal ball ?

Thanks yall for the comments.