I think the advice is a good one, can i call the number also cos i write quotes and poems as well.

Will like to know better what Jumoke does before calling her

Easter is here again
A day beyond decorations and vacation
At relaxation centres
A time beyond celebration alone
but a time to think of the reason
Behind his resurrection
which He did for your salvation.
He went through so many temptations
And frustration for you and me,
Likewise for nations.
The sensation and emotions
Of His love for us is so strong.
I imagine His passion
Over us "His congregation".
He spent 33yrs on earth to spread
The word of life to the world
Likewise to create/establish
the foundation and formation
Of eternal life for you and me
Because He has prepared a reservation
For us if you can face every tribulation
That comes your way here on earth.
There will be no room for explanation
From every generation of the world
No matter your position.
There will be no room
For you to check the book of revelation
On that day of His administration.
Think about this
And put an end to every procrastination
And let your determination
Take you to His destination.

End of a drunkard
I wonder why beer has fully changed the heart of some men
That prefers to see people so dear to them
In tears in need of money
Running everyday like the deer
With fear in their mind so as to meet up with what they want
:
What does it pay a man?
Who sits on a chair at the bar saying cheers
With his fellow peer eating pears, squander so much doe
He can’t bear to give out to the needy
He prefers to fall everyday
Walk in a hap hazard manner,
Sneered by the younger ones
::
People stare at him;
From the rear view of their stairs;
Shaking heads because he’s moving
close to six feet under the ground

@cooljoe


thanks, i look up to you guys

your encouragement will keep me writing.
Thanks once more

Dear Mother

Dear mama
You mean so much to me
Memories bring me much love
You make life meaningful to me
You will always be my African queen
Because you are a queen of queens
Each time I grumble
You give me money, good message to merry around with
The tender milk you gave me makes me to be man enough
To mention, you gave me manners
Which is the most valuable treasure
It helps me when my morale is disturbed
You’re marvelous and also a maneuvering tool
Thanks ma'am

Never you form with the way you walk, it will deform you

before there can be peace in the world of "continents", there must be peace in the world of "streets"

@torture


you're right, that's what we need

well done everybody in da house


good JOB

If you stop to commit crimes, then you will start to prime.

I traced you down to your place
to find a space in your heart
but only to see your face blazing
as if we're on a race running for one trophy.
You look so serious
as if you want to sit for the next JAMB
All i want you to do is to embrace me,
then I will erase the chase of other girls in my mind
because your thought will replace and displace their moves.

There is a satisfaction derived from every action of side attraction which afterwards can be called a distraction. Be focused.

@princesca

thanks


where is everybody, hope no problem

@cooljoe


good one! keep writing

You don't need to grumble
As things will bubble around you this month
Your foes will fumble, stumble
And tumble in a rumble
Which will give you a double promotion
Only if you will be humble.

There are two sides of life, LIFE of Property and LIFE of Poverty.

some can suppress their fellow ones
for their own progress in their fields
they don't think of others becoming successes,
all they think of is to possess the world
dress gorgeously like the queens/kings
press dstv remotes for best information
not thinking of others without a radio
they do things in excess
regardless of others at recess stages
I can confess to you that
they do these things to impress the society
knowing some are depressed by their act
but just say "thats their stress"
as a result of the express moves they make
because they know the less privilege can't assess their properties
:
::
:::
I guess the table needs to follow a turn-table format
for others to play with the chess as well.

i hail all of una oo

meex
colors
acan
angel
princesca
and others,

Your instinct is what makes you distinct

@meex


yes i know i have come so quick
and i hope i will continue to pick
as i feel i want to fall sick
from the kick i got from my chick
because i told her the milk
i got for her was with a brick of mine
and she thought it was a trick
and decided to beat me with a thick stick
I am tired and can't even speak
thank God am typing
as i am weak of speaking
but i hope to be better by next week
to get back to you guys "my clique"

Only God can take you out of depression
To your destination
For better promotion
Which will be beyond your imagination.
Then, I can now say congratulations
Because you have become a solution
To your generation.

@angel_empy

thanks angel, am only trying

@meex
you're the don, am looking up to you

@acan
well done, am feeling you

@colors
Female lord of rhymes

@ colors


thanks colors for your comment too


i have seen that it needs determination
for me to overcome the frustration
inasmuch i can rebuild my foundation
then,my relation with you guys
will take me to a good location
so that i can receive your admiration
.
,
I think there was no concentration in my work all this while
and has not given me the room for an explanation
in my conversation with you guys
and now the dedication is there
which will take me to my destination
and never let your expectations be high
as i have not gotten so much inspiration some days ago
because of my occupation
which involves so much operations
and navigation of departments
Presenation is all i do most
which hasn't given me the room for relaxation
because there are regulations guiding our work
in our organization
na so so safety and security orientation for here oooo
but the transportation to home is not as stressful
as that of lagos with great acceleration all day
like the situation of people in china with so much population.

I am preparing for office
and i hope you can feel my vibration with this little formation,

Have a good day colors,meex,acan,and the rest of the house.

@meex
anyway, i hope to improve
so that you guys can approve my rhymes
cos i do not want to be removed from the thread
but to groove with you guys
I'll move to the next level
to prove myself to you

@ meex and acan


meex, you make me smile, my HOD to supervise my work


acan, thanks

He's an Answer
When I needed a CLUE
He came to my RESCUE
No one was there for me
When I needed FOOD
He did GOOD to me
No one was there for me
I ran HELTER-SKELTER
but He got me a SHELTER
No one was there for me
When I needed someone AROUND
He was being FOUND
No one was there for this whole thing
And I KNOW
When I’ll need to SOUND to the world
He'll definately provide the GROUND
For me to display my talent
Who is HE?
MY GOD

@meexteriox

thanks for the encouragement

My Hood
Life is so rough in my hood
The abode of woods called home
Full of rude souls and hoodlums
Surviving in this neighbourhood
Takes so much discipline and policy
To achieve a good life.
I always think
If I can leave the suburb area
Because I’ll miss the rough faces
That blazes all day
Like the burning furnace
But I need to go on with life

meexteriox:

[center]Lekana dear
i don't think i can bear

your input so far
rendering it threadbare;

our ryhming thread
please, don't dread;

just an advice
don't make it look like a vice;

could you ryhme more
that's what is meant for;

hope you comprehend
so we don't leave you behind.[/center]

thanks meex, i got your point.I will make some improvement.Well,am still an amateur poet so you won't blame me that much.
Thanks anyway for the comment, for pointing out points that needs to be corrected.Some read and have decided not to correct.
Thanks, you will see more that will be better.

West City Rhyme Competition for 2008
Welcome! Welcome!! Welcome!!!

A Policeman enters the competition room and said YOU’RE UNDER ARREST

Oga Police? Give me chance because I dey do one test right now said Js
No way said police
I know you have come to arrest me said Js
And so? said police
So I suggest you don’t arrest me now,
You can come for me after the screen test said Js
I dey drag you go station said police
Okay…I arrest my case said Js

Now in Station

Wetin happen said D.P.O
He dey resist arrest said police
No Oga D.P.O…said Js
So what happened said D.P.O
He said he arrested me because am the best said Js
Best for wetin said D.P.O
For the contest wey I dey do said Js
Which kind case be this said D.P.O
Release the guy make he go rest said D.P.O
Thank you Oga;
God bless you said Js…

Out of Station

Oga Police? said Js
Wetin, sebi he don free you now? GO! said Police
Okay…said Js
GO! Said Police
Oh! God…this man request don come to pass said Js
He no let me manifest my mission finish well well said Js
Pin pin pin (bus sounding)
Go joo…I no dey go west this time said Js
Pin pin pin (bus sounding)
I go enter the next east bus said Js
Pin pin pin (bus sounding)
East! East!! East!!! (Akwa Ibom) said conductor
Make I enter this bus to try my luck for east said Js


End of the sequel