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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tecno4life(m): 12:25am On Dec 24, 2014
D9ty7:
More updates to drop at daybreak. Kip it locked and keep your comments coming.
Ebbisco: I welcome you into the house.

yes sir grin grin
hope before 6 am wey I go wake you don drop updates grin grin grin grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ebbisco(f): 12:26am On Dec 24, 2014
D9ty7:
More updates to drop at daybreak. Kip it locked and keep your comments coming.
Ebbisco: I welcome you into the house.
Thanks
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 5:33am On Dec 24, 2014
Onemansquad:

marriangement ??grin grin
yex... Any problems?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 5:46am On Dec 24, 2014
Whenever someone is about to die, I just smile.. No be say ah be ogbanje sha.. I just love the turn out of the story.. Keep it up, D9ty7!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 6:13am On Dec 24, 2014
Oyaaa Rachael, your turn!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:26am On Dec 24, 2014
tecno4life:


yes sir grin grin
hope before 6 am wey I go wake you don drop updates grin grin grin grin
oga don drop 12 updates cme read cheesycheesycheesy
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 6:27am On Dec 24, 2014
MhizEnkay:
Whenever someone is about to die, I just smile.. No be say ah be ogbanje sha.. I just love the turn out of the story.. Keep it up, D9ty7!
chei na so u wicked reach?
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by MhizEnkay(f): 6:36am On Dec 24, 2014
Bluestarry:
chei na so u wicked reach?
lol.. Sometimes.. Let nothing happen to Maleek oh grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 6:54am On Dec 24, 2014
adewealth027:
So...dis Ngozi still no learn her lesson?? Okay o
Onemansquad and tecno4life............una no dey sleep??
ah dy wait 4 u make we go 2geda ni o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 6:57am On Dec 24, 2014
tecno4life:


forgive kwa? angry angry
we beg for updates you come eat and clean mouth

Onemansquad bring your koboko with 5 branches angry angry grin grin
who i go use ma koboko flog
na ebbisco? New reader! Ok hold her 4 me na jst smal lashes *rolling ma koboko*
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:06am On Dec 24, 2014
MhizEnkay:
yex... Any problems?
a calabar woman i guess grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 7:08am On Dec 24, 2014
MhizEnkay:
lol.. Sometimes.. Let nothing happen to Maleek oh grin
grin grin tank God i av someone dat we are 2geda in dis
#Team maleek
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:00am On Dec 24, 2014
--continuation--
Kelvin and his men walked into the living room after they had taken care of Akpan who was caught unawares and didn't put up a bit a resistance as he was stangled and stabbed to death.
"Peace be unto this house." Kelvin said, typical of Nigerian pastors.
Rachel quickly stood up and cleaned her face with the hem of her blouse, alas, it was an August visitor, the least expected person at the moment. Her brother-in-law.
"Kelv, whatsup?" She managed to ask with a smile. The smile which soon turned to a frown and a look of fright when she saw the men who walked in after Kelvin.
Their apearances was the reason why she was afraid, she knew they can't possibly be here to harm her, when her only brother-in-law was among them.
"Have you sits. What can I offer you?" She asked. Maybe she thought they were here to congratulate her on her safe delivery.
"What do you all want guys?" Kelvin asked.
The guys numbering up to four, including Hakym voted and the majority voted for red wine which Rachel at once disapeeared towards the bar or the kitchen.
She returned two minutes later with a bottle of wine and five glass cups which she dropped on a stool before them.
"Do you mind if I open the drink for you guys?" She asked.
"Please do." Hakym replied.
She bent down and carefully opened the wine bottle.
"So Kelv, what brings you here?" She asked after taking a sit opposite theirs.
"We came on the orders of some great people you have wronged in this country." Kelvin began.
"I didn't wrong anybody?" She asked.
"Well, let me break it down. You made a copy of a confidential file and you kept it to yourself with the aim of showing it to the police. We from Khal corp has been sent to punish you for tampering with Chief Obi Patrick's privacy." Kelvin explained.
Understanding where they were driving at. So Kelvin is a terrorist?
"Drop you phone here." Hakym ordered pointing to the stool which had only a bottle of wine and five wine cups. She dropped her phone amidst the cups.
"We've been asked to kill you because you are an enemy and we'l do just that." Kelvin said.
"I trust me Father-in-law, he won't do such to me." She replied confidently, even though she still thought it was a joke.
Until Kelvin pulled out his 9mm rovolver was when she knew they had a lot of strategies to get anybody they so wish. Just last week, Sylvester's wife was killed and this week, its her turn afterall.
Kelvin inched closer towards her.
"Now, I can have my way with you before taking your miserable life." He said as he began tearing off her cloth with over three guns pointed at her.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Clement brought his car to a halt at the entrance of the estate and thought about his actions in the last five minutes or more. Even if he was under the influence of a certain spell or the other it doesn't warrant that he hit his wife, a resolution he had made right from the time he had reached puberty, which was why in his almost a decade of working as a professional police officer, he had never personally handled a female criminal case, because he knew there is no way you'd question a criminal without resorting to violence to make them confess. Now, he did not beat a criminal, but his own wife. And the last time he checked his Bio, he was from the East and not the North where 'sharia' permits a man to beat his wife if she offends him.
He needed to make things right immediately. He concluded as he ignited the car and drove forward to turn.
What was Akpan talking about when he was leaving? Was another question on his mind. Well, he'll find out in due time.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by adewealth027(f): 8:04am On Dec 24, 2014
Clement will be too late...........oh my gosh !!!!!!!!
D9ty7.......it seems I don't want rachel to die again o
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by amigos(f): 8:22am On Dec 24, 2014
He won't be too late.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ThaRuthlxx7: 8:22am On Dec 24, 2014
kelvin kill racheal Asap, and get d'hell outta there.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:34am On Dec 24, 2014
--*--
Chief Obi Patrick was seated in his living room watching the tv, something he hadn't done in months. He picked up the remote and tuned to his favourite channel, 'The Parliament 1.' A channel where live broadcast of the proceedings in the National and the state assemblies are being shown.
The first thing he noticed got his heart pumping excess amount of blood, it was a combined sitting of the two assemblies at the National level, that is, the senate and the house of reps members, presided over by the Senate president and deputised by the speaker, house of representatives.
What could have made them(the lawmakers) want to have a combined sitting? It only happens once in a blue moon, when an urgent decision, a matter of National security, development is about to be taken and they need the consent of the two chambers on the issue.
The sullen look on the lawmaker's faces another thing he notice. Of the five hundred lawmakers sitting down in the house, the over three hundred lawmakers in both chambers from the ruling party wore the sullen look, including the senate president and the deputy senate president.
Even though his greatest fear is about to be taken care of, he had ordered some men to go and eliminate Rachel before she mouth whatever secret she has to someone else. He also had a considerable amount of men searching around for Onome, the runaway maid. And thanks to Abdul Maleek who released his men, and he instructed them to check from one motor park to the otherr, and even though there had been no significant success, he was convinced that Onome was still in Lagos.
Then his eyes fell on the special adviser to the president of media and publicity standing before the distinguished and honourable house representing the president of the federal republic of Nigeria, as well as the secretary to the federal government. No doubt, the president's impeachment notice was being responded to.
He picked up his phone and dialled the president's line.
"Hello, Mr President." He said immediately the call was answered.
"The president is in the middle of something. He couldn't recieve calls as we speak." The president's ever present handler of phones replied and hung up.
Chief Patrick thought he should have introduced himself first before any other thing, but there is no point crying over spilt milk.
He dialled another number and waited for it to get connected.
"Hello madam." He said.
"Hello chief pat." A feminine voice replied.
"I called the president now and I was told he couldn't pick calls." Chief Patrick said.
"Aren't you watching? Everyone is in a bad mood presently, I even had to cancel my proposed trip to Bangkok for the annual communication summit, the minister for information would be representing me." The lady explained.
"I am watching also, that was why I wanted to call the president. But madam, what are our chances?" Chief Patrick asked.
"Sincerly speaking I don't know. He was charged with fifty seven impeachable offences, I don't see him getting out of it, but the senate president gave us his word, things would work our way." The woman explained.
"Alright. My regards to the president." With this he hung up.
If the first lady, a woman of pride, an egocentric woman who would stop at nothing to get whatever she wanted, she doesn't get worn out, she has been the one instilling confidence in the president, if she could speak that way, then something is wrong.
From the look of things in the house, the senate president seemed to have withdrawn into an invisible shell as he allowed the speaker of the house of representative to take charge and preside over the house, even though they still regarded him in every points raised, but he responded to none.
No doubt, the president would be impeached and everyone will be in trouble, because as soon as the president leaves office, he would be arrested and he would be forced to mention his accomplices, among which he was one. He needed to do something fast.
He picked his phone one again and dialled the vice president's private residence line.
"Hello, are you watching proceedings from the house?" Chief Patrick asked.
The response he got suprised him even to the marrow. The vice president bursted into laughter and some other people from his end joined.
"Do you take me for a fool? Patrick! You and your boy sent and assassin after me at the stadium a few months ago. Do you think I will just sit back and watch?"
"Maybe they thought you have no political tactics." Another familiar voice said.
"Gulak?" Chief Patrick asked.
"Give me one reason why my candidates won't be at the senate next year and you in jail." He mocked.
No doubt, Gulak and the vice president has been working together for a very long time.
Truely, politics is a game where trust is not needed, conscience is a sin, just play the game and make sure you are unhurt. Anyone who gets hurt is not your business.
-tbc-

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by tobilorba14(m): 8:49am On Dec 24, 2014
[color=][/color] guy u try gan.oya update xharparli

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 8:53am On Dec 24, 2014
Hmmmm........ Maybe Clement would catch his bro in the act

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 8:53am On Dec 24, 2014
Wao, d circle is getting smaller! D9ty7, thumbs up, u ar such a darling!
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:05am On Dec 24, 2014
tobilorba14:
[color=][/color] guy u try gan.oya update xharparli
u want kill yasef ontop Ngozi matter shey....khal corp 4 jst murder make u go once and 4 all
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:06am On Dec 24, 2014
grin grin grin d9ty7 9c tank u 4 killing akpan ...pls kill more
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 9:07am On Dec 24, 2014
shankies215:
Wao, d circle is getting smaller! D9ty7, thumbs up, u ar such a darling!
no let adeh39 hear it oo
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ziziola: 9:23am On Dec 24, 2014
Onemansquad:
grin grin grin d9ty7 9c tank u 4 killing akpan ...pls kill more
Guy you wicked ooo.#Team nobody must die#

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by kingphilip(m): 9:36am On Dec 24, 2014
Hmmmm d9ty7 nice updates boss u r really doing great

Rachel sure isn't going to die
Kelvin will b caught
the president impeached

but I see more deaths coming up as against the one d9ty7 talked about and the story might be rushed but please d9ty7 don't rush the story even if it finishes December 2015 no problem

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 9:38am On Dec 24, 2014
Onemansquad:

no let adeh39 hear it oo
no, she cnt na, shez busy in d kitchen frying xmas chicken for D9ty7, so she cnt cum hear now
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by shankies215(f): 9:39am On Dec 24, 2014
kingphilip:
Hmmmm d9ty7 nice updates boss u r really doing great

Rachel sure isn't going to die
Kelvin will b caught
the president impeached

but I see more deaths coming up as against the one d9ty7 talked about and the story might be rushed but please d9ty7 don't rush the story even if it finishes December 2015 no problem
Yhea! Seconded!

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Lilyomi(f): 9:44am On Dec 24, 2014
This story is simply mwahhhhhh! I jus hate dat is abt to end. D9ty7 u wer born a writer. God bless u more.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ultraawesome(m): 9:49am On Dec 24, 2014
tecno4life:


cheesy cheesy cheesy
merry Christmas cheesy cheesy cheesy
Same to you bruva.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Tobilastik(m): 9:50am On Dec 24, 2014
it is only a fool that will say:

Onemansquad:
grin grin grin d9ty7 9c tank u 4 killing akpan ...pls kill more

mehn.... I hate dz guy with passion, ve been reading his comment so far ...so since u ve shown us hw heartless u re, has it bring any positive change to ur life?
mtcheew
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Ebbisco(f): 10:01am On Dec 24, 2014
Nice job D9ty7. I hope Clement can save his wife.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by ultraawesome(m): 10:03am On Dec 24, 2014
Nobody cares about Akpan sef.

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