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Interesting!

Welldone D9ty7

I want to bring your attention to this.
In d second to the last update, at the beginning part, you were using Mike instead of Mark.

Don't mind me. Will edit it

D9ty7:

Don't mind me. Will edit it

No problem bro!
Welldone!

Should we expect more updates?

I said it earlier that Clara is the mole. Tina should be more careful of Clara. I don't expect her to trust. If Clara kills Ben while Tina facing panel, it won't be hard for Tina to get cleared of the offence since she was in panel when ben died. Let's see how the whole thing unveils. Good job

Tina shouldn't have trusted Clara . May God help her

tina will be vindicated 4 sure.. it may not b now tho.. i have a feeling d@ mark will catch her in the act

--continuation--
Mark walked into the ICT hall forty minutes later and as instructed walked over to Clara's table.
"Hi." He said.
"Handsome." She said with a smile.
"Are you ready?" He asked.
"Of course. Just a minute and I'll join you." She replied.
"Sorry, I can't enter without a keycard and I don't have one yet." He said.
"Take this. I'll be there in a minute." She said handing her keycard to him.
A minute later, Mark was descending the stairs into the west wing of the buiding.
"Hi Mark." A young lady greeted.
"Hello Doc." He said stopping to chat with her.
"You seemed to have settled down real quick." The lady dressed in a medical overall coat said with a smile.
"Well, settling down is not really a problem, afterall, Nigeria is my home. But I have problem with your food." Mark replied.
The lady bursted into laughter.
"Well, it happens. The same way we have problem with the weather in America and even your foods with those green leaves." She said.
"You have a point. But, you said you once lived in the US."
"Yeah, I had my one year housemanship in the US." She replied.
"That's great." Mark enthused.
The lady kept quiet staring at Mike with a smile, they have ran out of things to discuss.
"What's you...." Mark was saying.
"Ha ha. There you are. Come on, stop hiding and come out here." The lady said cutting Mark short. He turned and saw Clara coming out of hiding.
"Why are you hiding?" The doctor asked.
"I thought you guys are gonna lock lips. So I want to take pictures." Clara stammered.
"Naughty Clara." The doctor said.
"I guess, I'll see you around later." Mark said.
"Okay." And she walked away.
"Have you entered the questioning room?" She asked.
"No." He replied.
"You mean you left your assignment undone and you were flirting with a lady." She said angrily.
"Was I flirting? Is there anything wrong in stopping to chat with a colleague?" Mark asked.
"That's the height of incompetency. You ought to have been inside the questioning room getting prepared." She raised her voice one volume higher.
"Look here woman, you can't boss me around. If I like, I may sit down all day with a female colleague and flirt, its none of your business. I don't work for you and you don't for me either. Keep your cool and steer clear of my issues. Okay?" He ranted on and on.
"Abeg, swipe the thing jor." She said to him, once they were at the door.
"The key card belongs to you. Do it." He replied handling the keycard over to her.
She snatched it angrily, swiped the edge of the card on the register and the next minute, they were walking into hall.
"Hey man, wake up." Mark said walking towards Ben who sat motionless on the chair he was tied to.
He shook him for fourth time without response.
"What's wrong with him?" Clara asked.
"What did you do to him?" Mark asked.
"Do to who?" Clara asked with a shaky voice.
"Get the medics." Mark commanded as he pulled out his gun. And searched from one cubicle to the other. "Alert the security, the building should be on a lockdown." He odered as he moved about at alert and Clara did as he said.
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Tina was sitting in front of the disciplinary panel which was chaired by Collins who was throwing series of questions at her. The expertly answered the question, even though the panelist were not convinced.
"Miss Tina, all accussing finigers were pointed at you. Being the first person to see Idris corpse, we think there is more to it." He said.
Tina scoffed while Collins quickly gave her and apologetic look.
"But..." She was saying before the alarm sounded.
"The building is on a temporary lockdown. You are advised to stay wherever you are, an assasin is in the building. Stay where you are until you are told to leave." The voice boomed.
Tina sat down perplexed.
"Hey! Mark, what's going on?" She asked.
"What? Oh my God!" She exclaimed. "Okay, am on it."
She stood up at once and raced out of the room with Collins closely behind her and a few other agents.

--to be continued--

--continuation--
Mark Anthony was lying on his king size bed and a young woman was attending to him.
"Here is the milk you requested for sir." The nurse said handling a glass cup filled with milk to him.
She helped him sit up, with his back rested on the pillow set astride the head board.
"What did you call it?" Anthony asked.
"Milk sir." She replied.
"I said whiskey not milk. Get me whiskey young lady." He barked.
The young lady took a step backward.
"Sir, the milk is what you need for now. Taking whiskey or any strong drink will only give us another set back concerning your recovery. Take the milk, it will replenish..." The nurse was saying.
"What the fvck did I tell you need to be replenished? Did I loose anything?" He asked angrily as he threw the cup at her.
The content of the cup spilled on her body, from chest down to the skirt of her blue attire.
"Am sorry sir. I don't mean to get you angry." She said.
The door into the room opened and Danny Lovato walked into the room.
"What's going on here nurse?" He asked in his not so fluent English.
"Am sorry sir." The nurse said to Danny.
"Fine, go change your cloth and do to him, whatever he wants." Danny ordered as he drew a chair closer to himself and sat on it.
The nurse dejectedly made her way to the door.
"And get me whiskey." Anthony said.
"But sir..." She wanted to protest.
"Don't dare. Get him whiskey." Danny commanded and the nurse walked out.
"This girl is overstepping her boundaries. She is begining to treat me like a baby. I think we need to scout for a replacement while we eliminate her." Anthony poured out angrily while Danny used the opportunity to laugh his lungs out.
"You sure you want a replacement?" He asked.
"Seriously, I want a replacement. Its just that, whoever is going to replace might not be good in bed." Anthony replied.
"It is settled then. She stays, while I talk to her." Danny said.
"You had better do." Anthony replied.
"Yeah... You sent for me?"
"Yes. I want to know how far you've gone with the Mark Ashimolowo of a man." Anthony said and he could feel his heart skip a beat at the mention of the name.
"The boys have gotten quite a number of info about him. You wanna read them?"Danny asked.
"Not interested." Anthony replied.
Just then the nurse returned clad in an attire similar to the one soiled with milk, only that this time, the colour was white. She dropped a bottle of whiskey and two glass cups on the stood beside the bed.
Anthony reached out for her b**bs and squeezed it through the cloth. The nurse smile seductively once she felt the touch.
"I want Mark Ashimolowo in this chamber in the next twenty four hours." Anthony said as he beckoned on the nurse to join him on the bed.
"The boys will work on it." Danny replied rising up to his feet.
"I want him whole and healthy. Not even a scratch on his body." Anthony stressed.
"I will tell that to the boys." Danny said walking towards the door.
"Better do." Anthony enthused as he removed his shirt, thanks to the nurse who had gone shirtless.
"I will just excuse you two." With this, Danny turned the door knob and walked out.

--to be continued--

O boi, see as Mark Anthony is enjoying life. How will he feel when he sees his own son going against him? Let's see how the story unveils.

Dee, I don't really know where to start, I'm short of words, u are 1 in a million of writers, u are one of d best nd hardworking writers in NL. more ink 2 ur pen and more grease to ur elbow, more wisdom nd knowledge to ur brain. but Dee, dis story is sumhw similar to ALL IN A CIRCLE, or am I just imagining it? though d twist and turns is diff but u know d Son and Father issue looks similar. all the same I love dis story and I'm sure it will be tougher than AIAC. thanks 4 d update, expecting more from u.

adeh39:
Dee, I don't really know where to start, I'm short of words, u are 1 in a million of writers, u are one of d best nd hardworking writers in NL. more ink 2 ur pen and more grease to ur elbow, more wisdom nd knowledge to ur brain. but Dee, dis story is sumhw similar to ALL IN A CIRCLE, or am I just imagining it? though d twist and turns is diff but u know d Son and Father issue looks similar. all the same I love dis story and I'm sure it will be tougher than AIAC. thanks 4 d update, expecting more from u.

Is it really similar? Maybe yes. The Father-son factor. But there is more to the story than just Father-son.
All the same, I appreciate those accolades you just gave to me.

serzly dee ya juss the best... chop plenty kissss
muwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Well done bro. This is getting more interesting.

I must read till the end, now on page 2. Welldone D9ty7 nice work.

Shebarh:
serzly dee ya juss the best... chop plenty kissss
muwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Returns d kiss gently. Chai! Dis one na grade A enjoyment.
Hope no one z lukin sha? The mods fit ban me for dis o. Those pple jealous ehn.
Missmossy: I see you.

"A case? What's the matter?" Clara asked.
Tina loved Clara for her ability to convince you of her innocence even though she was caught in the act.
"I'll tell you when I return."
Clara smiled happily." before rising up to leave.
"Are you still seeing Mayor?" Tina asked.
"Your brother dey fvck up jor." The two ladies laughed as Clara left the office with Tina's notepad.
Unknown to Tina, Clara had a motive for accepting to stand in for her. And immediately Tina left for the disciplinary hearing, Clara went into the questioning room with one sole aim. Which was to kill the suspect who was being held and planned on dropping Tina's key card(which she had stolen unknown to the owner) somewhere conspicous.

I hope she(tina) has a plan, or else her doom is near and without much ado, she wont survive this, provided all things go in accordance with Clara 's plan, I think mark has a lot of work to do here ooo


Oga, so you are a MUSLIM? It's good thou

D9ty7:

Returns d kiss gently. Chai! Dis one na grade A enjoyment.
Hope no one z lukin sha? The mods fit ban me for dis o. Those pple jealous ehn.
Missmossy: I see you.

Onemansquad are you here and shebarh is playing around?

Mark you must see throuqh clara's deciet, you are not that dumb; you must please be the one to overturn her evil preceedings against her.

Lovato the main guy, keep the ministry moving.

Tina your carelessness is being used against you, God please send a Messiah to her.

Keep them coming Dee, Btw am i the only one seeing that the updates are short?

[quote
author=stuff46 post=31786761]Mark you must see throuqh clara's deciet,
you are not that dumb; you must please be the one to overturn her evil
preceedings against her.

Lovato the main guy, keep the ministry moving.

Tina your carelessness is being used against you, God please send a
Messiah to her.

Keep them coming Dee, Btw am i the only one seeing that the updates are
short?[/quote]
shork ke? u nid 2 wear eye glasses nxt tym caow!
so Clara wanted Mark to go in 1st so dah he wuld b caught red handed in d murder of Ben! Nawa o, dat gal whoosky
oga dee, rode on!

Shebarh:
serzly dee ya juss the best... chop plenty kissss
muwahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

smh *i c u o*
so u ar cheating on me wit dee

D9ty7 Oh so uv'e started anoda story & I no even knw Abeg mek ona wait for me oo, ma start from d beginning, I dey com.

lmao.. oms and stuff it juss a kiss ntn serz..
was juss api.. dis story will be more hotter dan aiac but it myt end on tym

deca gbosa! for oga dee..... kip the vehicle moving!

Clara said and did it

prettydiva89:
Clara said and did it

i pray mark is wise enough to know d mole now

Yea I don show finally. Gr8 story as usual

omotalkie:
Yea I don show finally. Gr8 story as usual

which means of transportation did you take Land,Water or Air. You started this story today and you are already with us.

prettydiva89:

which means of transportation did you take Land,Water or Air. You started this story today and you are already with us.

Ma dear is air ooh. U know its faster

What's going on here? Where is the pilot of this bus? Young man, we need you right here before we start boarding another bus angrily. Deeeeeeeeeeee, let's get down to business. Your fans are waiting.

Nice plot,nice description,nice setting and great suspence.
Well done darl.
I still believe there is still room for improvement.

D9ty7,more inspiration.

I need more

Sorry guys, I couldnt update today. I am deeply sorry.
Lets meet tomorrow abeg!

D9ty7:
Sorry guys, I couldnt update today. I am deeply sorry.
Lets meet tomorrow abeg!

No prob.

Take care!

Hope its notin serious?
Need help?

omotalkie:
Yea I don show finally. Gr8 story as usual

omo u try gan ooh, wey many ppl dey fail ontop d suspence